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EDIT!!! I spell corrected this thing. It's so old please don't kill me if facts are not right T^T

~this story is dedicated to Chouonsoku for doing this awesome picture of Silver and Blaze. ENJOY!!!~

'Silver... please... don't die...'
I hear her voice, the one who I have been with ever since I could remember. I've loved her more than any thing but now it's too late to tell her. Soon I won't be with her any more. I lay in her arms thinking if there is some possible way that I can stay with her. But those chances have nearly vanished. This is my story.

It started out as a normal day; Silver and Blaze were walking around the city. Soon they came to the park and sat on the bench were they first sat together.
'Blaze there is something I have to tell you.'
'What is it Silver?' blaze said looking at Silver.
Silver got lost in her amber eyes, and once again, couldn't tell her how he felt about her.
'Silver?' Blaze said trying to get her friends attention.
'Oh, never mind.'
'hmp, naive as always, aren't you Silver?'
Silver began to blush.
'Ok Silver just come out and say it,' he thought to himself
'Blaze, when we defeated Iblis, when you went away, I felt so alone but ever since you've come back I've never felt happier.'
'Silver were are you going with this?' blaze interrupted.
'Blaze, I... WHHAA?!?'
The earth started to rumble. Everyone ran for cover, Silver and Blaze stood watching. The sandbox, were Blaze used to play, started to rumble a crack, a huge crack spread from the sand box. An inferno of flames and lave erupted from the cracks.
'What's going on!?!' Silver exclaimed.
Blaze stood in shock.
Lava erupted high into the air forming a horrifying/familiar figure. Iblis. His long tentacles stretched far destroying and burning down buildings.
'You actually thought you could get rid of me' Iblis said.
Blaze still stood in shock 'It's not possible' she shuttered
Silver took a step toward Iblis 'Haven't we already put an end to you? Why are you here?' Silver exclaimed.
'Revenge... destruction... to burn down this puny planet. And there is nothing that a weak telekinesis hedgehog can do about it!' Iblis struck a tentacle down at Silver.
The word 'weak' ticked silver off. As the tentacle rushed down at Silver, Blaze still was in shock. Silver took the hit.
'Perhaps you haven't realized how much stronger I have become' Silver took to the sky, also to distract Iblis from Blaze, Silver knew that she was in a stage of shock of seeing Iblis again.
Iblis struck ember from his mouth at Silver, Silver avoid all of them, but a tentacle slammed him into a nearby building. Silver got to his feet and took to the sky once more.
'Let me show you just how strong I really am' Silvers body started to glow a blinding bright blue his gloves and shoes glowed brighter than ever. Silver had never had this much power at once.
'No, only Galaxy (I just made this up) could fully master the telekinesis, how? Unless your his son' Iblis inched back.
Silvers power continued to rise, Silver raised his arms at Iblis.
'Iblis! (I'm just guessing on this part) my father sealed you away and banded you there for eternity! But there is only one way to send you away forever, die Iblis!'
An amazing power of telekinesis flew from Silvers palms and hit Iblis with tremendous force.
'NOOOO!!!!' Iblis screamed silvers power was too much, Iblis shattered, then vanished.
Silvers powers drained Silver had overused his powers way over there limit. Silver fell to the ground.
Blaze finally snapped out of her stage and rushed over to silver.
'SILVER!' blaze kneeled down at silver. Silver looked at Blaze and closed his eyes. Blaze held Silver in her arms. 'Silver don't you give up on me! Silver!'
'Blaze... I'm sorry...' Silver mumbled weakly. Blaze's eyes started to swell up with tears.

Now here I am I can fill my body slipping away. I can't hold on any more. Blaze, my heart, goodbye.

'Silver... I'm sorry. I love you. silver.' a tear fell upon silvers eyelids and rolled down his cheek. Blaze held her friend closer and kissed him on his cheek.

What is this? I fill so warm now.

Blaze continued to weep.
'Blaze?' a weak but familiar voice said.
Blaze's eyes sprung open and looked at Silvers face. His eyes were barley open but they were open, looking at her partly grinning.
Blaze tears sprung to joy, she hugged Silvers neck but tried not to hug him too tight. Despite his pain silver wrapped his arms around Blaze. Blaze loosened her grip.
'I thought you were dead.'
'I was, but you brought me back.'
'But how?'
'Love is more powerful than death. I love you Blaze.'
'Silver' Blaze kissed Silver on the lips. 'I love you too, Silver'
FINISHED! a story based on my fav. sonic couples Silver and Baze! specal thanks to :iconchouonsoku: for drawing such a great pic.! it in spired me! the pic is called, ' please don't die'.
theme for this story:
three days grace- time of dying
Read, Enjoy, and Comment!
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littlerockfarmer6588 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful story!! Love it!!
aledragoness Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Very beautiful story! I started reading it and just couldnt stop! Definitely reading it again and again! :D
KikiFlamer Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
haha thanks! gosh this is so old i'm surprised that anyone still does! XD
Silvvy-The-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, so good. I loved it. It reminded me of the story I worte, Silver Gets Shot. :rofl: Except Silver actually died in that one. Nice job. :hug:
KikiFlamer Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
aww, thanks! :hug:
i saw that story on your home page but i didn't get to read it. i read it when i'm done reading some things on my messages... he dies!?!
thanks again! :hug:
Silvvy-The-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Haha. No problems. :glomp: And yes. My story is like yours, Blaze finds Silver, cry cry Silvaze etc etc. But Silvah dies in the end. =3
KikiFlamer Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
can't wait to read it! i have to read a few more things and put something in a journal entrie :iconnikkihog: had on one of hers. it funny! i wonder what your will be?
Silvvy-The-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I see. I await it.
KikiFlamer Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
i just got done with it! yes!
Silvvy-The-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
=3 Cool.
Chouonsoku Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This story is so cute. ^^ I like the way you wrote it, and your version of the facts too. X3 Iblis is indeed the official enemy that fits the best to the story. ^^
I'm also happy to see you chose a happy ending and made Silver admitting his feelings for Blaze. :) That's as I imagined the next part of the story.
And yes, love is more powerfull than death. X3

Keep up the cool work. :clap:
binditheskunk Featured By Owner May 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
acctuly in a page that i read it said that siver could very well be related to shadow
KikiFlamer Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
thankies! :hug:
and for the fav to! :peace:
Chouonsoku Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome :glomp:
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